New Poem for the New Year: Thoughts?
My dear friend requested that I update my blog, although I believe there are maybe four people who've ever read it... here's a recent poem of sorts. Comment as you like. Suggestions for improvement are much appreciated! Thanks.
(written 1/2/06)
WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS?
he asked.
Thinks, thunks, thoughtedies?
Dangerous asking for this.
I wanted to sound brilliant,
confessed
my plagiarism of ideas
Othello and Williams’ lecture
Iago’s thoughts given to Othello,
to his detriment
Need more be said? Or thunked?
The internet: a source.
Wanted to be brilliant,
he thunked I was already
he “still worry completely insensitive to” me
missing words, I thoughted:
“I’m” and “being”
the copula: D’s terminology
All ideas plagiarized somehow
Do YOU THINK SO TOO?
WOULD YOU AGREE?
(written 1/2/06)
WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS?
he asked.
Thinks, thunks, thoughtedies?
Dangerous asking for this.
I wanted to sound brilliant,
confessed
my plagiarism of ideas
Othello and Williams’ lecture
Iago’s thoughts given to Othello,
to his detriment
Need more be said? Or thunked?
The internet: a source.
Wanted to be brilliant,
he thunked I was already
he “still worry completely insensitive to” me
missing words, I thoughted:
“I’m” and “being”
the copula: D’s terminology
All ideas plagiarized somehow
Do YOU THINK SO TOO?
WOULD YOU AGREE?
posted by B-Go at
4:17 PM
2 Comments:
wonderful, bose. keep em coming.
By
Nora, At
2:06 PM
i've revised this poem and will soon put the newest version up. i think it's gotten better.
By
B-Go, At
8:21 PM
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