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Friday, February 02, 2007

prose writes

And... a poem... or something. I'm not sure.


HYPOGLYCEMIC NIGHTS

Every night before bed, Take your snack.

Then, every now and again—even if I listen—I wake unable to find the opening from where I hear Mother’s voice. Sheets wrapped tangly about my head, thighs sticky with sweat, and arms shaking from within Dad’s old, torn sleeves—my new sleep shirt. Mother—or a friend’s mom, on sleepover nights—offers peanut-buttered crackers and milk when I get my head free enough to see. Not minding the crumbs in bed, not worrying if my teeth stay un-brushed until morning smells my dead-insect breath, Mother makes creases beside me until nothing’s dizzy anymore. Until, Okay.

9 Comments:

  • I think you did an excellent job of conveying the mood of one of those nights... This is an eloquent piece of writing! I especially love "not worrying if my teeth stay un-brushed until morning smells my dead-insect breath".

    This whole piece gives off a very visual vibe.

    Peace,

    Taiko-ma

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 11:37 PM  

  • "one of those nights" hmmm

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 9:03 PM  

  • oh, that comment was me

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 9:03 PM  

  • the "hmmm" comment isn't clear to me.

    By Blogger B-Go, At 10:40 PM  

  • "one of those nights" wasn't clear to me - how taiko-ma read those nights - so I wrote, "hmmm." That's all.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 11:28 PM  

  • "hypoglycemic nights" was my guess.

    i know, i spend too much time procrastinating.

    By Blogger B-Go, At 11:43 PM  

  • Yup. I meant "one of those hypoglycemic nights".

    Any "hmmm" caused by aforementioned statement is hereby disavowed, disclaimed, discombobulated, and possibly disembarked. ;)

    Peace,
    Taiko-ma

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 9:20 AM  

  • taiko-ma, are you hypoglycemic?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 4:22 PM  

  • No, I'm not. To clarify my comments: I think B-Go wrote this so well that anyone who read this would get a glimpse of how it feels to have a hypoglycemic episode.

    When I read Ray Bradbury, for example, to me his words just TASTE good. That may sound funny, but its just the feeling of a rich wholeness in the work.

    This is that. Good stuff.

    Peace,

    Taiko-ma

    By Anonymous Anonymous, At 9:13 PM  

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