revised THOUGHTS

Here's the new version of the old poem, THOUGHTS? that you will find on a previous post, if you want to look... anyway, I think these improvements have helped the poem. Thank you, Nora for helping me with this!

THOUGHTS?

WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS?
he asked alone.
Thinks, thunks, thoughtedies?
Dangerous inquiry.

I wanted to sound brilliant,
confessed
my plagiarism of ideas
Iago lashing thoughts on Othello
Ensuing despair.

The internet: a source.
I wanted to be brilliant
he thunked I was already
he wrote, “I still worry
completely insensitive to you”
missing words, I thoughted:
“I am” and “being”
the copulas: Professor’s “taughted” terminology

All ideas plagiarized somehow
Do YOU THINK SO TOO?
WOULD YOU AGREE?

He was depressed when he asked me.