with a word
LIFE
my edges are rough-groomed fern
rightward leaning palm
trees and coconut brush;
my edges are the contoured shapes
of a beer-belly man, island mass
shifted well along timed tectonics;
my edges are my own—infinite
in complexity; mirth; solitude; perfected by
seeming imperfections;
haphazard placements;
anomalous blinking live-wire fire
flies grouped as fanfare splays
of honest, unabashed prints: my own
with a word, life
whether right or left
Thanks, readers, for being patient while I go these days without posting much.
P.S. how does everyone feel about the use of "my" in the poem? anyone think it should be "your"?
Labels: poem

2 Comments:
No. I think it should stay "My." If worship is the purpose, it should be personal and intimate, shouldn't it?
By
Anonymous, At
6:34 PM
but whose world is it? it's not mine, as in B-Go's...
By
B-Go, At
7:04 PM
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